WTMFIL Part 5:
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WTMFIL Part 5:
I think that being that it has bene over a week since Part 4...part 5 is ready to come out.
If you need a recap on last week's episode, please go to the following link:
viewtopic.php?t=2520
And the waited part 5 beings...
Moments passed as Jim and Dave wrestled for life down on the other side of the bed. Sheets were pulled off the bed...grunting noises came from both mouths. The moments seemed to tick away so slowly until the noises stopped.
Night had fallen by now...and the moonlight lit the sheets of the body that rose. Ironically enough, the living man was just like a ghost...but living nevertheless. Whoever it was wrestled with the sheet to pull it off, and when they did, everyone was shocked at who it was.
It...was...Jim.
Lizzy screamed...Ms. Nikki burst into tears, and Phantom's face became so horrid that it could have moved boulders. Jim, however, had not escaped unharmed. There was a huge gash across his chest, and blood streamed from an empty eye socket. He was shaking and it looked like his knees would buckle under his wieght at any moment.
There was a shocked silence in the room...everyone expected Dave to rise up and finish Jim off...but he never did. The Jim just collapsed to the floor...both men dead.
Phantom walked over to where both men lay, pulled David aside, and kicked Jim in the ribs before spitting on him. Phantom muttered some curse at Jim and then turned to pick up Dave.
He carried Dave bakc over to where Ms. Nikki and Lizzy now stood...and they all weeped...
...Two years later...
Ms. Nikki and Phantom were married shortly after Dave's sacrifice to save the ones he cared about.
Lizzy was crushed after the incident, and it took her a long while to get over Dave...and even today she still remembers him.
But every now and again they all remember...they remember Dave and how he saved them all... and how he sacrificed himsef in the name of love...
The End.
If you need a recap on last week's episode, please go to the following link:
viewtopic.php?t=2520
And the waited part 5 beings...
Moments passed as Jim and Dave wrestled for life down on the other side of the bed. Sheets were pulled off the bed...grunting noises came from both mouths. The moments seemed to tick away so slowly until the noises stopped.
Night had fallen by now...and the moonlight lit the sheets of the body that rose. Ironically enough, the living man was just like a ghost...but living nevertheless. Whoever it was wrestled with the sheet to pull it off, and when they did, everyone was shocked at who it was.
It...was...Jim.
Lizzy screamed...Ms. Nikki burst into tears, and Phantom's face became so horrid that it could have moved boulders. Jim, however, had not escaped unharmed. There was a huge gash across his chest, and blood streamed from an empty eye socket. He was shaking and it looked like his knees would buckle under his wieght at any moment.
There was a shocked silence in the room...everyone expected Dave to rise up and finish Jim off...but he never did. The Jim just collapsed to the floor...both men dead.
Phantom walked over to where both men lay, pulled David aside, and kicked Jim in the ribs before spitting on him. Phantom muttered some curse at Jim and then turned to pick up Dave.
He carried Dave bakc over to where Ms. Nikki and Lizzy now stood...and they all weeped...
...Two years later...
Ms. Nikki and Phantom were married shortly after Dave's sacrifice to save the ones he cared about.
Lizzy was crushed after the incident, and it took her a long while to get over Dave...and even today she still remembers him.
But every now and again they all remember...they remember Dave and how he saved them all... and how he sacrificed himsef in the name of love...
The End.
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Re: WTMFIL Part 5:
So, uh... what changed?formermarcher wrote:Phantom's face became so horrid that it could have moved boulders.
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Married, huh? Who would've thunk it! Well dang, I thought I was never going to get married and I did without even knowing it!!formermarcher wrote:Ms. Nikki and Phantom were married shortly after Dave's sacrifice to save the ones he cared about.
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Well...things like that can happen unexpectedly.MsNikki wrote:Married, huh? Who would've thunk it! Well dang, I thought I was never going to get married and I did without even knowing it!!formermarcher wrote:Ms. Nikki and Phantom were married shortly after Dave's sacrifice to save the ones he cared about.
You can always divorce him if you want to.
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PART 6!!formermarcher wrote:Well...things like that can happen unexpectedly.MsNikki wrote:Married, huh? Who would've thunk it! Well dang, I thought I was never going to get married and I did without even knowing it!!formermarcher wrote:Ms. Nikki and Phantom were married shortly after Dave's sacrifice to save the ones he cared about.
You can always divorce him if you want to.
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Re: WTMFIL Part 5:
Well unfortunately, I would not be able to divorce him. I don't believe in divorce. Well let me rephrase that ... I don't believe in divorce for myself. I can understand why some people just should NOT be together (i.e. my parental units), but I know that I would want to try to work it out.formermarcher wrote:Well...things like that can happen unexpectedly.
You can always divorce him if you want to.
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Sorry...euphman wrote:awww no love for me??? I'm hurt.
As for a part 6...well this can be one of those endings where you decide what happens
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Oh, the choices.TrumpetsRule17 wrote:mm interesting ending
lol time to find a guy for lizzy in part 6 as replacement
Maybe I'll just make a normal poster a character...
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It'd be like...WTMFIL: The Next Generation sorta thing...BariLizzy05 wrote:hehe...out with the old and in with the new...hehe j/k
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