WTMFIL Part 4:

formermarcher · Post by **formermarcher** » Sat Nov 22, 2003 5:25 pm

And while most everyone is at championships...I write WTMFIL Part 4.

If you need a recap on last week's episode, please go to the following link:
viewtopic.php?t=2454

And the dread part 4 unfolds...

Phantom stood next to Ms. Nikki. Jim was on the ground near the bed with Dave hanging over him (still in his mounty suit). Lizzy, who had fainted, had woken up and was still in bed...

Everyone hung on what Jim had to say. "You and Lizzy...are....are...." He couldn't get out the last word due to the blood rising in his throat.
"Phantom...your dad...Nikki...Lizzy's mom"
Blood began to spurt out of Jim's mouth and he fell to the ground, rasping for breath.

Dave turned to face Phantom..."You can't be my father...my father is alive and well at my home back in Toronto." "Your right, Dave, I can't be. I've never been married...let alone to Ms. Nikki."
"I hope your not my dad...that would in a sense make Lizzy and me related...and I don't think I could live with that. After some of the things went on" he finished talking with a shudder.

Now unseen...Jim creeped under the bed, and had grabbed the knife during the confusion. He crawled through to the other side and pulled himself onto the bed next to Lizzy. He drew the knife and held it right abover her throat.

"Nobody moves, or the girl dies!" Every whipped around to see Jim, and Lizzy screamed.
Dave turned around and saw Jim, threatning what he cared about. Without thinking, Dave leaped onto Jim, knocking the knife aside, and both of them fell off the other side of the bed, wrestling while everyone else could only watch to see who arose alive and victorious.

Anxious moments passed, with grunting and loud hits and slaps. More moments passed before there was a gurgling noise then silence. Slowly a figure began to rose...hunched over, but still alive.

It was...

To be continued

Lizzy05 · Post by **Lizzy05** » Sat Nov 22, 2003 7:53 pm

wow! Very nice, although...yeah. DUDE! You are just all about this suspense thing! I swear, can't wait til next episode!

TrumpetsRule17 · Post by **TrumpetsRule17** » Sun Nov 23, 2003 2:13 am

haha nice use of time
if you cant be at championships, then be at the forum

IsnipeWithAknife · Post by **IsnipeWithAknife** » Sun Nov 23, 2003 8:51 pm

Commercial Breaks!

Personal · Post by **Personal** » Tue Nov 25, 2003 11:20 am

Greta job so far man. This stuff rocks. I can't seem to get enough. It feeds my addiction for Smallville throughout the week.

formermarcher · Post by **formermarcher** » Tue Nov 25, 2003 12:56 pm

Personal wrote:Greta job so far man. This stuff rocks. I can't seem to get enough. It feeds my addiction for Smallville throughout the week.

Wow!!! I feel special now!

TrumpetsRule17 · Post by **TrumpetsRule17** » Fri Nov 28, 2003 1:47 am

dang wut happend to smallville this week?
stupid movie or somthing took over its spot