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WTMFIL Part 3:
Here it is, the long awaited Part 3 of
When Two Mods Fall In Love
If you need a recap on last week's episode, please go to the following link:
viewtopic.php?t=2364&start=0
Now here is the highly aniticpated part 3...
Darkness crept into the world as the sun had finished setting. Ms. Nikki was sleeping blissfully in her single apartmen that oddly had a dressing room attached to it.
The night is suddenly pierced with a scream as Ms. Nikki springs awake, screaming as she recalls her dream. Phantom was in danger...no wait. Phantom was dead...but he was in Dave's beach condo...Jim was there. Her daughter was in danger! And Dave? What did this all mean? She never got dreams like this...best she go just to make sure everything was okay...
Minutes later, at the Beach:
Jim was still holding the knife, staring at Phantom.
"No...your dead" Jim said in a quivering voice.
"You see Jim...this is between you, me, and Ms. Nikki. Deal with me, not them."
Jim puases for a moment before hurling the knife at Phantom.
Phantom, who had anticipated Jim to do that, performed a Matrix-like manuver and dodges the knife. The knife, thrown with such power, stuck into the wall abouve the bedside table on Dave's side of the bed. Lizzy, scared to death, passed out.
Jim growled with frustration, before charing into Phantom and knocking them both to the ground. The rolled around for awhile, exchanging punches, kicks, and bites.
Dave, seeing his oppurtunity, decides to get out and end this now. But he didn't have anything on and he couldn't do anything like that. Quickly looking around, he sees the only he can wear hanging over a chair.
Thats right...the mounty suit. Dave throws it on, grabs the knife from the wall, grabs Jim, and holds the knife to his throat.
"Alright, old man. End of the line here for you. You'll not bother us anymore. Get out, and don't come back or I end your life just like you tried to end mine." said Dave.
"Go on, boy. Kill me. I...dare...you." taunted Jim.
An awkward moment passed.
"Foolish boy! Should have killed me when you had the chance!"
Jim elbowed Dave in the gut and stepped away. He kicked Dave in the gut, knocking Dave to the ground. Dave gasped for breath, and noticed he had dropped the knife. It had slipped to the ground, just under the bed.
Jim started walking overto Dave to finish him off, but the next thing Jim knew, he too was on the ground. Who was there to save the day other than Ms. Nikki!
Dave and Phantom both got up, ran over to Jim, and started beating him senseless. After they had finished, Phantom and Ms. Nikki shared a loving moment, filled with a long dramatic kiss.
"Phantom! How on earth are you alive???"
"Oh that...I haven't been totally honest with you...I stuided martial arts for years and years. I also learned to to make it as if I were dead. The shot was just a flesh wound...I did the rest. I just didn't tell you..."
Ms. Nikki, with tears in her eyes, clinged to Phantom.
Then she saw Dave, in the mounty suit. Saying nothing, she simply smiled.
Jim, who had regained his sense, slowly rose to his feet. Dave moved in to finish Jim off...again, but Jim waved for a moment.
"Dave...there is something you don't know! Before you do whatever you want to me...know this:
Phantom and Ms. Nikkie haven't been honest with you and Lizzy at all. And its atrocious that they let this continue. You see, Dave...you and Lizzy are..."
To be continued!
In part 4:
What just did Jim say to Dave?
Dave still wears the Mounty suit...
And someone makes the ultimate sacrifice...
When Two Mods Fall In Love
If you need a recap on last week's episode, please go to the following link:
viewtopic.php?t=2364&start=0
Now here is the highly aniticpated part 3...
Darkness crept into the world as the sun had finished setting. Ms. Nikki was sleeping blissfully in her single apartmen that oddly had a dressing room attached to it.
The night is suddenly pierced with a scream as Ms. Nikki springs awake, screaming as she recalls her dream. Phantom was in danger...no wait. Phantom was dead...but he was in Dave's beach condo...Jim was there. Her daughter was in danger! And Dave? What did this all mean? She never got dreams like this...best she go just to make sure everything was okay...
Minutes later, at the Beach:
Jim was still holding the knife, staring at Phantom.
"No...your dead" Jim said in a quivering voice.
"You see Jim...this is between you, me, and Ms. Nikki. Deal with me, not them."
Jim puases for a moment before hurling the knife at Phantom.
Phantom, who had anticipated Jim to do that, performed a Matrix-like manuver and dodges the knife. The knife, thrown with such power, stuck into the wall abouve the bedside table on Dave's side of the bed. Lizzy, scared to death, passed out.
Jim growled with frustration, before charing into Phantom and knocking them both to the ground. The rolled around for awhile, exchanging punches, kicks, and bites.
Dave, seeing his oppurtunity, decides to get out and end this now. But he didn't have anything on and he couldn't do anything like that. Quickly looking around, he sees the only he can wear hanging over a chair.
Thats right...the mounty suit. Dave throws it on, grabs the knife from the wall, grabs Jim, and holds the knife to his throat.
"Alright, old man. End of the line here for you. You'll not bother us anymore. Get out, and don't come back or I end your life just like you tried to end mine." said Dave.
"Go on, boy. Kill me. I...dare...you." taunted Jim.
An awkward moment passed.
"Foolish boy! Should have killed me when you had the chance!"
Jim elbowed Dave in the gut and stepped away. He kicked Dave in the gut, knocking Dave to the ground. Dave gasped for breath, and noticed he had dropped the knife. It had slipped to the ground, just under the bed.
Jim started walking overto Dave to finish him off, but the next thing Jim knew, he too was on the ground. Who was there to save the day other than Ms. Nikki!
Dave and Phantom both got up, ran over to Jim, and started beating him senseless. After they had finished, Phantom and Ms. Nikki shared a loving moment, filled with a long dramatic kiss.
"Phantom! How on earth are you alive???"
"Oh that...I haven't been totally honest with you...I stuided martial arts for years and years. I also learned to to make it as if I were dead. The shot was just a flesh wound...I did the rest. I just didn't tell you..."
Ms. Nikki, with tears in her eyes, clinged to Phantom.
Then she saw Dave, in the mounty suit. Saying nothing, she simply smiled.
Jim, who had regained his sense, slowly rose to his feet. Dave moved in to finish Jim off...again, but Jim waved for a moment.
"Dave...there is something you don't know! Before you do whatever you want to me...know this:
Phantom and Ms. Nikkie haven't been honest with you and Lizzy at all. And its atrocious that they let this continue. You see, Dave...you and Lizzy are..."
To be continued!
In part 4:
What just did Jim say to Dave?
Dave still wears the Mounty suit...
And someone makes the ultimate sacrifice...
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Re: WTMFIL Part 3:
Wow ... good for you, Phantom. You savor that, take and run with it, cuz it's probably the last one you're going to get.formermarcher wrote:Phantom and Ms. Nikki shared a loving moment, filled with a long dramatic kiss.
Didn't know you could get all mushy, Former.
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Oh ouch...ouch ouch ouch...MsNikki wrote:Didn't know you could get all mushy, Former. [/color]
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"Its not what you do or what you say, but HOW you do it that matters the most"
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Hey hey now, no need to cry. I wasn't being mean!formermarcher wrote:Oh ouch...ouch ouch ouch...
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.... I don't think I want to read the next one, lol!formermarcher wrote:You see, Dave...you and Lizzy are...
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Please please PLEASE don't say they're related. Oh goodness, please don't say that! But I can't think of what else it could be ...formermarcher wrote:You see, Dave...you and Lizzy are..."
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OMG, that would by kinda wierd if they were related...and totally Star Wars like. Anywayz, I can't wait for the next one. BTW, thanks Dave for the whole Mounty thing.
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Wow...I should make this into a weekly thing.Personal wrote:Anywayz, I can't wait for the next one. BTW, thanks Dave for the whole Mounty thing.
And you are *quite* welcome. Gave me something to write about as well.
And for everyone who doesn't want them to be related...well then thats just wrong ain't it? But then again, can I be considered a moral person (prolly yeah).
Find out in Part 4...same bat time, same bat channel.
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From the Moorpark field show, I have currently completed 3A-1 and 3A-2. They are available for viewing in the marching band forums.TrumpetsRule17 wrote:hmm just wondering did u finish your review yet?
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